Friday, November 11, 2005

the falling leaves

Photo by Dawn M Turner, courtesy of www.morguefile.com

lull in the
windstorm
rustling of leaves returns

...

autumn leaves
falling
with the rain

4 Comments:

At 7:24 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

hun ur haiku is really good... but ur not doing it in the right format or anything. it goes,
5
7
5
and ur like. screwin with it

 
At 7:32 AM, Blogger Kevin said...

Hi there, thanks for the comment! I have been following the Japanese style, which is much less restrictive about format. I know that most of us, at least in English-speaking countries, learned the 5-7-5 format. But I'm not into constrictive formats.... 5-7-5's can be beautiful, don't get me wrong. But I write 'em as I see 'em. Thanks for visiting the blog!

Kevin

 
At 7:30 PM, Blogger SafeTinspector said...

Kevin, i think ur doing fin.

 
At 8:34 PM, Blogger Kevin said...

Thanks for the vote of confidence, SafeT -- you are quite sardonic, a phun comment!

kevin

 

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